100wc week #12

The Battery

Bob plopped down on an old grey park bench to eat his double tuna melt sandwich. He picked up his tuna melt, when a white and brown battery came rolling towards him.
Puzzled, he picked up the battery and gave it a good stare. "Who dropped this?" he called out. Suddenly, Bob could shape out an energetic body builder charging towards him. "Is this y-yours?" Bob asked holding out the battery, but he didn't answer.
Bob noticed that this man was carrying a chainsaw. Bob threw the battery at him, when the chainsaw buzzed and Bob watched it disintegrate. "I'm out!" Bob yelled, while he hurried out of his seat. The man was chasing him. Bob suddenly realized that he stood no chance. He stood still as the man got closer, and closer.

Comments

  1. Unknown1 December 2017 at 20:43

    Too many words for the 100 word challenge. Your story starts off really strong but the ending needs some work so that if fits the beginning tone of your story.

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