100wc week 21

Tree Yoga


"1, 2,3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10!" I looked around a bush but instead of finding my sister I saw a bunch of trees doing yoga.
"Alright, now push-ups," the teacher commanded. The trees got down and did push-ups. I laughed and decided to join them. I walked out of the bush and onto the field.
"Back off!" One said. The teacher gasped.
"I come in peace," I said, but they were gone. I started doing yoga by myself.

Comments

  1. Gill E23 February 2018 at 22:22

    Great work on using quotation marks . I like your word phrasing, ex. "I come in peace." I am going to challenge you to use more descriptive words to provide more visualization of what is going on in your story.

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